diff --git a/Adventures in Lestoria/assets/config/story/Chapter 1.txt b/Adventures in Lestoria/assets/config/story/Chapter 1.txt index 7bc0b193..d1639eac 100644 --- a/Adventures in Lestoria/assets/config/story/Chapter 1.txt +++ b/Adventures in Lestoria/assets/config/story/Chapter 1.txt @@ -2,39 +2,39 @@ {LOCATION Bleakport Outskirts} {BACKGROUND sea.png} [] -You are on your way from Bleakport to the Lestorian Forest, where you want to hunt slimes. +You are on your way from Bleakport to the Lestorian Forest, where slimes can be found. -Slime Remains are used to brew healing potions and recent pirate attacks around Bleakport used up alot of those. +Recent pirate attacks around Bleakport caused increased demand for healing potions. -This makes it an easy opportunity to make some coin. +Collecting slime remains is an easy opportunity to make some coin. -Merchant crossing is getting close, the smoke of the campfires can already be seen. +With the Merchant Crossing getting closer, the smoke of the campfires can already be seen. Merchant crossing is a Crossway that connects Bleakport, the Lestorian Forest, Eagleview Mountains and the Capitol of the Lestorian Kingdom, Clafton. -The crossing is famous for merchants to rest on there travels and trade goods with each other. +The crossing is famous for merchants to rest on their travels and trade goods with each other. -While you are getting closer you realise something isnt right. the Smoke on the sky is way thicker then what you would expect from a few campfires. +While you are getting closer you realise something isnt right. The Smoke in the sky is way thicker then what you would expect from just a few campfires... -You reach the crossing where a #691718horrible scenery#FFFFFF awaits you. +You reach the crossing where a #FF0000horrible scenery#FFFFFF awaits you. -Tents are burning and lifeless bodys lying on the floor. It looks like some Bandit attack, which also is a kinda strange occurance. +Burning tents and lifeless bodies are lying on the floor. It looks like a Bandit attack! What a strange occurence. -Bandit groups weren't active in the past 50 years because of the Lestorian military. +Bandit groups haven't been active since the Lestorian military was established 50 years ago. In the entire history of the Lestorian Kingdom, there are no wars on the records. -Which leads that the military is used more like a police force, which presence discourages large scale crimes. +Which leads that the military is used more like a police force, discouraging large scale crimes. -The only active criminal group in the Area would be the Pirates in the Bleakport area. +The only active criminal group in the area would be the Pirates in the Bleakport area. -But even they know that they can only operate because the Lestorian military isnt leaving the mainland. +But even they know that they can only operate because the Lestorian military isn't leaving the mainland. -You search the entire camp for any survivors. And finally, you found someone still breathing. +Continuing onward, you search the entire camp for any survivors. And finally, you find someone still breathing. -you feed him a health potion, clean his wounds with water and close them with bandages. +Rummaging through your bag, you quickly feed him a health potion, then proceed to clean his wounds with water and close them with bandages. -The health potion seem to work kinda fast. The mans consciousness returns a few minutes later. +The health potion seemed to work quickly. The man's consciousness returns just a few minutes later. [?,Sherman] {LEFT Sherman} @@ -43,19 +43,19 @@ Th..Thanks. [You] -no Problem. Rest for now. +No Problem. Rest for now. [] -after around half an hour of letting the health potion work the man finally seems to be in a somewhat stable state. +After around half an hour of letting the health potion work, the man finally seems to be in a somewhat stable state. [You] -How are you feeling. +How are you feeling? [?,Sherman] -Better, i guess. +Better, I guess. [You] @@ -63,15 +63,19 @@ Can you tell me what happened here? [?,Sherman] -I... We... No, it happened way to fast. +I... We... No, it happened way too fast. [You] -Thats ok, maybe your memories come back later. Whats your Name? +Thats okay, You can tell me more as your memory clears up. Whats your name? [Sherman] -Sherman. Professor of the Lestorian Science Corporation. +#00FFD0Sherman. Professor of the Lestorian Science Corporation.#FFFFFF + +[] + +Sherman's response surprises you a bit. You did not expect anyone from the Science Corporation to leave the Capitol in the first place. [You] @@ -79,117 +83,121 @@ I'm [Player Name]. Adventurer and Hunter. [] -You are kinda surprised of his response. You did not expect anyone from the Science Corporation to leave the Capitol in the first place. - While you are deep in thoughts, suddenly Sherman starts to panic. [Sherman] -The stone. did they... please, can you check if you can find a red colored stone? It was in my bag. +The stone. did they... + +Please! Can you check if you can find a red colored stone? It was in my bag. [You] -calm down. I see if i can find anything like that. +Calm down. I'll see if I can find anything like that. [] -You check every bag around the loaction where you found Sherman. +You check every bag around the location where you found Sherman. -While searching you realise that whoever did this wasn't after money. +While searching you realise that whoever did this was not looking for money. -You don't find any red stone though. +You don't find any red stone though and shake your head towards the scientist, frowning. [Sherman] -What shall I do. I can't return to the Kingdom without it. +Oh what shall I do? I can't return to the Kingdom without it! [You] -First you should rest. Once you are able to walk on your own again, we can think about a solution for your lost object. +First you need more rest. Once you are able to walk on your own again, we can think about a solution for your lost object. {BACKGROUND rest.png} [] -You set up a tent and a campfire a little outside of the main camp where the tragedy happened and help Sherman to move over. +You set up a tent and a campfire a little outside of the main camp where the tragedy happened and helped Sherman over. + +Without the corpses surrounding you, you relax a little bit. + +[] + +You keep an eye on Sherman as he recovers. -Without the corpses surrounding you, you relax a little bit. For the rest of the day you keep an Eye on Sherman while he recovers. {BACKGROUND sea.png} -The next day Sherman no longer lying down, instead sitting on the grass. +The next day you wake to find Sherman no longer lying down but is instead sitting on the grass. [Sherman] -Good Morning. You told me you are an Adventurer right? +Good Morning! You told me you are an Adventurer right? [You] -Morning... Yes i am. Why? +Morning... Yes I am. Why? [] -Sherman is full of Energy you can barely tell that he almost died a day before. That health Potion you gave to him performed a miracle. +Sherman is full of energy. You can barely tell that he almost died the day before. It was as if the Health Potion made him into a new man. [Sherman] -Ok, So you remember the Stone i asked you about yesterday right? It's an source of Energy we currently are investigating. +Ok, So you remember the #FFBF00Stone#FFFFFF I asked about yesterday, right? It's a source of #F2FF00Energy#FFFFFF we are currently investigating. We may have lost the first stone. But we got a clue that another one lies deep inside the Lestorian Forest. -With that Stone i could return to the kingdom with something to show. i obviously would pay you for it. +With that Stone, I could return to the kingdom with something to show. I obviously would pay you for it. It should be in a cave somewhere in the middle of the Forest. [] -For the Slime hunting you have to enter the Lestorian Forest anyway. Therefore searching for a cave while doing that doesnt sound like a big deal. +Since you're doing Slime hunting anyways, might as well search for the Stone in the process. Searching for a cave while doing that doesnt sound like a big deal. [You] -I am on my way to the Forest anyway. I can check any cave i come across and if I find any Red Stone i will report back. +I am on my way to the Forest anyways. I can check any cave I come across and if I find any #FFBF00Red Stone#FFFFFF i will report back. -No promises though. My main goal is Slime hunting. But i see what i can do to help. +No promises though. My main goal is slime hunting, but I will see what I can do to help. [Sherman] -Great, i still feel a little weak so i will be staying in this camp for now. +Great! I still feel a little weak, so I will be staying in this camp for now. -Also i expect Lestorian Soldiers to show up soon to investigate the campside. Guess i can help as witness. +Also I expect Lestorian Soldiers to show up soon to investigate the campsite. Guess I can help as a witness. [You] -Did your Memories return? +Have your memories returned? [Sherman] -Well, a few things but i still need to sort myself. I cant really tell you more then what i did yesterday. +Well, I definitely remember a few things but i still need to sort myself out. I can't really tell you more than what I've said yesterday. [You] -Guess i have to take that answer for now. I am on my way to the Forest. bye. - - - - +Guess I have to take that answer for now. I am on my way to the Forest then. Bye. ===STORY_1_2=== {LOCATION Lestorian Forest} {BACKGROUND sea.png} + [?,Greg] Did you defeat the Monsters? [] -A voice from the top of the trees appears. +The voice is coming from the tops of the trees. A man peeks down from a tree canopy and makes eye contact. + +You confirm there are no more monsters in sight. [You] -I can't see any more atleast. +I can't see any more at least. [?,Greg] -thats great. Give me a short moment i come down. +That's great. Give me a short moment, I'll be right down. [] -A man Starts Climbing down a tree. +A large, scruffy man with a beard starts climbing down the tree. When he reaches the ground he faces towards you and grins slightly. {LEFT Greg} {RIGHT You} @@ -199,43 +207,43 @@ Hello, my name is Greg. Thanks for the rescue. [You] -Rescue? i am just hunting slimes. Anyway, [Player name]. Glad i could help. +Rescue? I am just hunting slimes. Anyway, [Player name]. Glad I could help. [Greg] -You for sure did. I was wandering around and didnt realised that a bunch of slimes sneaked up on me. +You for sure did! I was wandering around and let my guard down. Got caught with a bunch of slimes sneaking up on me. -Luckily those guys can't climb trees. But those damn slimes are really good in just waiting. +Luckily those guys can't climb trees. But damn they are really good at just waiting around. -Was sitting for over one day on this tree. +Was sitting for over a whole day in this tree! [You] -Did you had any plan in case no one would have come around? +Did you have any plan in case no one would have found you? [Greg] Nah, got enough food and water on me. Could have stayed there for like a week. -Last time this happened I was able to leave after 3 days. +Last time this happened, I was able to leave after 3 days. [You] -Last time? ... Anyway, why are you even in the forest if you are not Hunting Slimes? +Last time?! ... Anyway, why are you even in the Forest if you are not hunting Slimes? [Greg] -Ever heard of the Echanted Trees deep inside this Forest? +Ever heard of the Enchanted Trees deep inside this Forest? -I dont have any proof that those really exist but since i heard about them i cant think of anything else then find one. +I dont have any proof that those really exist but since I heard about them I just can't stop thinking about finding one. -Its said that they look on first glance like a normal Cedar Tree, but there wood is hard as Steel. +It's said that they look on first glance like normal Cedar Trees, but their wood is hard as Steel. -Legends say that a sword out of this wood is Sharper then any normal sword made with steel and way lighter. +Legends say that a sword crafted from this wood is sharper then any normal sword made with steel, and and way lighter. Perfect for fighters like you! [You] -Sounds like a great material. But if its hard as steel. any Plans how to cut it down? +Sounds like a great material. But if it's hard as steel, how would you cut it down? [Greg] @@ -249,11 +257,13 @@ Sounds like a great material. But if its hard as steel. any Plans how to cut it Never thought about that part. -This could indeed become a Problem. +This could indeed become a problem. -Maybe i leave the forest for now and think up a plan before returning. +Maybe I'll leave the forest for now and think up a plan before I explore again. + +{PAUSE} -If you search for me, i will be at merchant crossing. Offering my skills as a Blacksmith to Merchants. +Hey, If you're looking for me, i will be at #00FFD0Merchant Crossing#FFFFFF. Offering my skills as a #ADADADBlacksmith#FFFFFF to Merchants. [You] @@ -261,20 +271,17 @@ About Merchant Crossing... [] -You explain Greg what happened at the crossing. +You explain to Greg what happened at the crossing. [Greg] -Thats not good. You said you build a small camp nearby? Guess i will go there for now then. +That's not good. You said you built a small camp nearby? Guess i will go there for now then. -If you need any weapons or armour. you can find me there. +If you need any weapons or armour, you can find me there. See you later. - - - ===STORY_1_3=== {LOCATION Stone Wall} {BACKGROUND sea.png} @@ -284,57 +291,64 @@ You see a crack in the Stone Wall. The closer you get to the crack the colder the air feels. -A shiver runs down your spine. This doesn't feel like a normal cave. +A shiver runs down your spine. This doesn't feel like any ordinary cave. Its big enough that you can enter without any problem. After a few steps inside, a glimmering red light lightens up the cave. -you follow the way until you hit an open Space. +You follow the path until you hit an open space. + {BACKGROUND cave.png} -The Walls are slick. No Rocks spiking out of the walls. the entire room has some unnatural feeling. +The walls are slick. No rough rocks or stalagmites are spiking out of the walls. The entire room has an unnatural feeling to it. + +In the middle of the room is some kind of #F2FF00Pillar#FFFFFF which is the same height as your Torso. -In the middle of the room is some kind of Pillar which is the same heigh as your Torso. {LEFT Red Stone} {RIGHT You} -On Top of that Pillar lies a redish Stone Cube. +On Top of that Pillar lies a red-coloured #FFBF00Stone Cube#FFFFFF. -The Stone Cube seems to emit the light +The Stone Cube seems be emitting light. -In the Wall behind the Cube are runes engraved. +Behind the Cube is a Wall engraved with runes. -You never seen anything close to those runes and obviously can't read them. +You have never seen anything like these runes before and obviously can't read them. [You] -This could be the Stone Sherman was looking for. +This could be the #FFBF00Stone#FFFFFF Sherman was looking for! [] -You get closer to the pillar and grab the Cube. +You get closer to the pillar and grab the Cube. It's surprisingly lightweight and gives with little restraint. + +Then... + {LEFT} {RIGHT} *click* {BACKGROUND cave_dark.png} Darkness. -The Stone Cube is still glowing but the glow is way weaker then it was before. +The Stone Cube is still glowing in your hand, but the glow is now very faint. -The light its emitting is now to weak to see your own foot. +It's now too dark to even see your own feet. The sudden unexpected darkness casts fear on you. -You turn around and search for the way back. +You turn around quickly and search for the way back. + +Returning seems to be no problem, until... -Returning seems to be no Problem, until. +{PAUSE} Halfway back you suddenly feel a movement. -An Earthquake. +An #C72500Earthquake#FFFFFF! -Its not a strong one but in your current position it is extremly dangerous. +It's not a strong one but presents a threat remaining inside a cavern. -Even though you still can't see anything, you start running. +Realizing you might be in extreme danger, you start running, doing your best with the little light source you have from the #FFBF00Stone Cube#FFFFFF. {PAUSE} @@ -342,9 +356,9 @@ Even though you still can't see anything, you start running. {PAUSE} {BACKGROUND sea.png} -Finally. Sunlight. You are out of the cave. +Finally. Sunlight. You managed to escape the cave uninjured. {PAUSE} -Together with the Stone Cube you leave the Forest behind. +Together with the #FFBF00Stone Cube#FFFFFF you leave the Forest behind.